[MaryJane]

Once Upon a time
There was a boy and a girl name
hoozel and greetal
they lived with there rich Familey
in a deep dark forest
instead of toys they gave them
bed pans and they where forced to clean the
tolets until there fingers bleed
One day they exaped
: and hoozel and greetal left a trail
of bed pans so they would get lost in the deep
so they came opon a teany tiny
dog house
they entered the dog house as
inside went deep down in to a cave filled with
little puppy dogs and the world down below was
cast by a spell
: by a good witch name ruffka
: the world had many children
turned into puppy's and had all there dreams and
desires
till one day there evil rich parents
went to look for them cause they didnt have a
maid for there rich house so they fallowed
hoozels bed pan trail into the deep dark forest
so there parents aproched the
teany tiny dog house and was suckin to the dog
house with suprise and the good witch decided to
cook them for supper so the kids can have a all
u can eat bafay and they lived happely ever
after THE End

[Scotsman]

Boy, and I thought Grimm, was, err, grim

[roseraven]

different kind of story MJ